Group: Pitch Presentation

Group Feedback

• One major piece of feedback we received around our pitch was on lighting and colour and has made our group consider the use of colour grading to differentiate between dreams/ visions and reality.
• It has also made us realise that when filming we need to be particularly careful about what is in shot as we will be filming in Hamish's house and as a result there will be a need to move things around in the rooms used throughout filming.
• Sound design has also received some important feedback with the suggestion of quieting sound for dream sequences in the scene to help build tension.
• The major problem we encountered was the perception of the plot and as a result we may need to rethink how the scene is carried out to simplify it and make it more accessible.
• As we have pitched the character as a magician it was suggested that he could use a magician's "box of tricks" with various ways for killing his victim.
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