AN: Horror Opening Feedback

Strengths

• Pull in on Dan when talking to the psychiatrist looks good
• Chase scene well shot and smooth
• Choice of font is good
• Shot of the toaster works well
• Cut at end of the psychiatrist scene good
• Sound Build over end of interview good suggests panic
• Storyline is easy to follow
• Nice variety of shots
• Editing smooth
• Reverse guitar unique and adds character
• Background music tense
• Concept was liked by most of the people i had shown it to

Weaknesses

• Sound balancing sometimes inconsistent
• Dan smiles as he takes down the note
• Bedroom TopHat reveal feels bizarre
• Pitch of Dan's voice in the bedroom scene strange
• Cuts on stair scene confusing
• Chase feels out of character
• Hat over the camera feels cheap
• Last title reads strangely due to choice of font
• Cross dissolve between scenes had mixed feedback
• editing at points is too rapid and could be slower